(g) many returns… (5.8)

many returns…

blushing pink sunset
followed by the moon and stars;
missed during the rains

©JP/dh

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(g) Spring View? (3.16) wp

Observing 16
Spring View?
(katuata (count-type) pieces)
*
long shadows looming
over the crisp field of snow
proves that the moon is shining
*
bitter cold creates
delays for schools and commutes
rearranging schedule starts
*
boulders line the roads
of the wintry mix that was
once known as Snowstorm Stella

©JP/dh
katuata 5,7,7 line/syllable count

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Just Karma 212 November 2016 wp

Just Karma 212
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

as eyes wake

at seven the setting
moon
rests briefly in bare tree branches

luna is
held
in a dream scene

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4

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Just Karma 97 for May 2016 wp

Just Karma 97
games
(a mini haibun).

pale pearl in the eastern robin’s egg
blue sky tries (..peek-a * ) …and tries
to play hide.(.peek-a-boo ) and seek
-as dusk sets (*…a-boo.*) at the end
of the day as we travel down the road

pale pearl moon sets
covered by clouds, a jewel;
evening’s sky

©JP/dh

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Just Karma 42 for November 2015 wp

Just Karma 42
(Collom Lune trio)
a different beginning

lingering sunset stretches
pale pink, orange to blue
the painted sky
*
universal treasures seen
as the day draws itself
to a close
*
not quite full
November moon has a halo
of rainbow hue

©JP/dh

http://earthsky.org/space/what-makes-a-halo-around-the-moon &
if you Google search images for double and triple halos around the moon
go to the images and the 11th line 5th from the left there is a photo by
Sergio Montifur – that is the closest to what I saw
The moon though was not full November 23, 2015 around 7:30 pm

Jack Collom Lune: The form is 3/5/3 words.

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Just Karma 38 for October 2015 wp

Just Karma 38
Trinet
Behold

Orion holds
the moon
like a torch lighting the way
helping me to hunt and find
just a
few words
to remember

©JP/dh

The Trinet: just 7 lines with word counts of 2,2,6,6,2,2,2

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