Just Karma 217 November 2016 wp

Just Karma 217
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

still, blowing

all the flags almost stiff
facing
north – as the winds from the south roar

attempt to
rake –
comical sight

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4

My other main blogs that my icon may or may not go to when I leave a comment:
Flash Fiction
= Fiction or non… &  Longer Strands = longer verse

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