Just Karma 213 November 2016 wp

Just Karma 213
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

course correction

heron attempts to land
ducks quack
translates to: no room here for you!

reverse flight;
wings
must take to air

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4

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4 thoughts on “Just Karma 213 November 2016 wp

    • The heron came in from the south and tried to land. Got ‘quacked-off’, turned around and headed back from where he came. Not quite flying backwards, but had to reverse his ideas on where he was landing. 😉

      Speedy recovery! We have a relative who had to have that wrist surgery and another who because of numbness in fingers had to have surgery twice on the same hand.

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