Just Karma 206 November 2016 wp

Just Karma 206
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

bone chilling

at five the sun is gone
the dusk
becomes shucked husk bearing no fruit

clouded sky
shows
no moon or stars

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4

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Flash Fiction = Fiction or non… & Longer Strands = longer verse

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12 thoughts on “Just Karma 206 November 2016 wp

  1. I love this line “the dusk becomes shucked husk bearing no fruit” Did you put these two forms together yourself or was it a form already? They work together really well. This poem is perfection

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