Just Karma 204 November 2016 wp

Just Karma 204
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

amber carpet

window view, witness fall
the eye
follows gems leaving branch to ground

maple tree
charm
lands so softly

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4

My other main blogs that my icon may or may not go to when I leave a comment:
Flash Fiction = Fiction or non… &   Longer Strands = longer verse

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amber

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4 thoughts on “Just Karma 204 November 2016 wp

  1. interesting form here – unfamiliar to me, which is not unexpected, but you make such elegant use of it – it’s a lovely dynamic paired one with the other – and well, what a tapestry that weaves itself, yes? fluid and textured …. and if you’re really lucky, strong winds may blow in and save some hours of raking! 😉

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