spinal tap CD bonus GW 36

spinal tap CD GW 36 haiku noir

chalk lines flickered red
and blue along with the neon
words; empty and dark

at that hour the diner was
almost empty of gawkers

the witness shivered,
black cup of joe brought no warmth;
robbing her lipstick

she hadn’t seen anything;
and local Leo’s believed her

I could read crime scenes
and faces; and she was an
open book to me

I just had to read between
the lines to get to the truth…

©JP/dh

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/12/carpe-diem-ghost-writer-36-haiku-noir.html

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5 thoughts on “spinal tap CD bonus GW 36

  1. I could read crime scenes
    and faces; and she was an
    open book to me

    It certainly presents a challenge. This is keeping the suspense alive. Great lines Jules!

    Hank

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