Prompted tan renga “a dream in a dream”

Prompted tan renga “a dream in a dream”

I
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red                                     © Georgia

betrayed like Ceasar, stabbed
broken hourglass; sand stops                          ©JP/dh

II
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red                                      © Georgia

hanging, his red union suit
now slack; he basks in the sand                        ©JP/dh

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Union_suit

III

a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red                                    © Georgia

trading bare silver maples
for palms a dream vacation                            ©JP/dh

Thanks Georgia 🙂

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/11/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-61.html

 

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6 thoughts on “Prompted tan renga “a dream in a dream”

  1. Just hitting and missing, hoping that you will continue to have a lovely Thanksgiving weekend, Jules!
    You wrote a great post here with good descriptions, too. I like the broken hourglass image, along with the possibility (in my mind) of a Santa Claus…. just a fun thought to a rather serious set of verses…

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