11.13 …host… CD 603

11.13 …host… CD 603

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great mountain
would you could you host
a coven of crows

overhead a half moon hangs
at six as the black birds caw

Note:

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What could be written
about Mt. Fuji from
eyes so far away?

overhead Venus keeps a
half moon company; crows fly

©JP/dh

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/11/carpe-diem-603-mount-fuji.html

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6 thoughts on “11.13 …host… CD 603

    • Thanks. I did have fun though finding out that I had actually spotted another planet.
      I am thinking now that maybe Venus near the moon is a spring or summer event. But as you say interpretation and timeing really are just perception 🙂
      So the verse as it is, is still enjoyable.

    • Just how it was outside my door at 6 am this morning.
      Venus was closer to the east (center of the sky) and the half moon was about (a hand extended) four fingers to the west – with the almost straight line on the west side.

      But then we can imagine that the Goddess was having English Breakfast tea with the Man in the Moon 🙂

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