Opals, Emeralds & Uncut Diamonds, Oh My! Daily Poetic Verse for The River by JulesPaige

on point

a tanka:
on point

another snow fall
covers previous foot falls
squirrels, fox, deer

and the neighbors big fat cat
who uses my yard freely

©JP/davh

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Comments on: "on point" (3)

  1. Stick a couple of scary things under the snow ;-) Just kidding. lol

  2. made me smile these last lines… This was amazing writing. Thank you, love, nia

  3. loved the last stanza the most :)

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