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Free Verse and an Elfje
always up
down in the canyon
sharing delights
of a landscape
painted and
weathered
by the sun
always up
the sun rising
through pines that
glisten like gold
to rocks
with stories
yet to be told
always up
down in the canyon
to expanding
the view from
the birds eye
in the whisper breeze
of poetic song
~~~
wren
resting, recites
the local majesty
down in the canyon -
up
(c) JP/davh
I think this is very interesting how you used the “up” and “down” to get us to the edge of our seats.
Another lovely tribute, that leads us to meet the recipient and enjoy her work too.
Beuatiful poem. I love the way the first lines ‘always up’ link it together.
Lovely verse!
Oh Jules…your poem is so lovely and quite beautiful. I am honored that you wrote it in honor of my poetry. Thank you so much! Would you mind if i posted it over on my blog with due credit to you. Wanted to ask you first.
Of course. Thank you for asking. Cheers!