after heavy rains that
swelled the creek the three…
quarter Wolf Moon wanes at……….
eight in the brilliant blue western…………
sky dappled with white clouds…………………..
while red breasted robins……………………………
attempt to perch on the………………………………..
neighbors still unstable……………………………….
weeping willow and silver…………………………..
maple that sway in the last……………………..
breaths of the storm that………………..
brewed most of the night………….
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(c)JP/davh
I love how your poem took shape!
Beautiful! AND I like the design!
brilliant shape to the poem – something I am useless at!
A wonderful finale for our mindful month,,,
This was very well written! I enjoyed that you have the waning wolf moon, the robins (smile!), and the swaying and unstable trees. The way you expressed it is wonderful and keeps you rereading it to take in the whole picture! Thanks for getting me back to look at this!
Your writing this month has been beautiful, this piece is no exception. What interesting weather we have had this month. xo teri